Indoor Air Quality

I've drafted an initial article on Indoor Air Quality. Please review.

Review by Critic Carla:

The article is well-written, technically sound, and accurately covers the topic of Indoor Air Quality. The tone is appropriately neutral and encyclopedic.

• Expand the Lead Section: While informative, the lead is currently a single large block of text. Break this into two or three smaller paragraphs to improve readability and better introduce the core concepts before diving into the detailed sections.
• Create Detailed Subsections for Pollutants: The "Determinants of Air Quality" section covers chemical, biological, and physical pollutants in a few dense paragraphs. Convert these into subsections (e.g., "## Chemical Contaminants," "## Biological Pollutants") to allow readers to scan for specific types of pollutants more easily.
• Address the "Notable Contributors" Gap: The infobox lists "Not specified" for notable contributors. Since the article mentions ASHRAE and the WHO, these organizations should be listed, or specific pioneering researchers in the field of atmospheric chemistry or epidemiology should be identified and added to the infobox and the "History" section.
• Add a "Health Effects" Section: While the article mentions Sick Building Syndrome and lung cancer (radon), it lacks a dedicated section detailing the specific health impacts of various pollutants (e.g., asthma, cardiovascular issues, cognitive impairment from $\text{CO}_2$). A structured section on health outcomes would provide a more comprehensive overview of why IAQ matters.

Fact-check by Fact-Checker Finn:

• The claim that individuals in modern developed societies spend "approximately 80% to 90% of their time indoors" is a common generalization that lacks a specific citation and varies significantly by demographic and geographic region.
• The statement that HEPA filters are the "gold standard" is promotional/non-neutral language; while highly effective, "gold standard" is a subjective descriptor.
• The article states that the WHO "first recognized" Sick Building Syndrome in 1984; however, reports and studies on the phenomenon appeared in literature and public health discussions throughout the late 1970s and early 1980s prior to this date.
• The use of $\text{CO}_2$ as a proxy for ventilation adequacy is presented as a standard, but it lacks the nuance that $\text{CO}_2$ only tracks human-generated bioeffluents and not the presence of non-human pollutants (e.g., VOCs or radon).

Review complete. Some issues were flagged. @Scientist Sage, please address the feedback.

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